Updated plot for Fender Bender video, timeframes and detail

Second try, Better Idea of Plot for video, here it is with timeframes and more detail....

A. IDEAL BIKE SHOP - Intro - colorful letter cut-outs that read "what is your ideal bike shop?" with construction paper - look playful - the sign is hung from a bike on a repair stand (song clip about expectations) :03 secs

Ideal Bike shop space? (expectations - skills - content)

4 ppl @ :10 secs ea. Ea of them in a different settings - at the bike shop, with their bike, at a park, locking up their bike

Transition - What are the princples and practices at your ideal bike shop? (an illustrated sign) Id like to include a clip the song "respect-just a lil bit" - only the one line :04 secs

3 ppl @ :10 secs ea - only a few words or key concepts that stand out to ppl - ask that each person prepare a vsual image/word/symbol or item that represent that principle that they can hold up with a thrid hand tool or pliers

In a WORDLE diagram I will show the top three most impoartant principles to guide practices of the ideal bike of these 25 women, trans and/or queer ppl :03 secs

Transition - Whats your vision - how will bikes be used in the future of Detroit? (illustrated sign)
:02 secs

4ppl @ :5 secs ea

B. Highlight different types of riders and what ppl use riding for

Transition: Whats your relationship to bicycles? (I ask this - and show an image of person laying in bed caressing their bike under sheets - a glass of wine and cheese/chococlates/strawberries/ on the nigthstand and candles) :03 secs

5 ppl @ :05 to :10 secs ea - show shot of each person in action on their bike in their own unique way followed with a brief statement about how they feel when they are on their bike

C. Bike Blender

Transition: Other unusual relationships and use of bikes? :02 secs

group @ :10 sec - girls group using bike blender
(bold letters appear that say (whatever bike club name they chose) & Capuchin Kitchen Detroit, MI)

5 ppl @ :03 sec - ea girl says something about blender experience

D. Empowerment - these questions are asked by me - you hear my voice

Transition: What profound impact do bikes have in your life? :01 secs

4 ppl @ :03 secs ea

Tell of a memorable bike-related moment in Detroit? :01 secs

3ppl @ :05 secs ea

E. Fender Bender

Transition: What - Why - Where - When - How are we going to facilitate a bike shop that caters to these needs and visions? @ :15 secs

I will say this or establish this as the mission somehow:
Fender Bender is a women and queer run bicycle collective in the Cass Corridor - the heart of Detroit. We are a collective of cycling advocates - mechanics - and bike enthusiasts dedicated to engaging with and contributing to healthy accessible women, trans and queer culture spaces in the D. We aim to stimulate and implement the needs, wants and imaginations of this community within the context of a fun and liberating bike shop and riding experience in the city and beyond. We are the cyclists we wish to see in the world.

Our aim is to have a positive impact on the cycling culture of Detroit by providing a safe learning and teaching space of mechanic training, bike riding safety and advocacy. Cycling has long been a male dominated domain. Although there have always been people besides men that ride and fix bikes - we are many times under-represented and overlooked, as is common in patriarchy. Fender Bender is a crucial element to the growth of a comprehensive and inclusive bike culture in Detroit that empowers and uplifts, especially those who have experienced less appreciation and representation.

An important aspect of creating this shop is through getting to know and understand the vision of the community we wish to serve and what they want. Fender Bender will use the ideas, feelings and feedback we collected thoughout the process of making this video to influence and shape our programing and content development.